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ghostwriter for the loops

Postby deejaybonez (PHP) » 18 Jan 2012, 00:12

Where are all ths writers in hip hop. I'm sure most artists on here write their own material but I'm sure y'all have unfinshed concepts and ideas that aren't songs yet. Lemme know or get an idea n write if for u. Check sum ma tracks tht I spit on

Quarantine

That Ill Noise

Phantom Freestyle

I can write fa anybody.

Any takers
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Lietez » 18 Jan 2012, 11:44

If you want to write for me, i'm gonna make it a challenge.

Style: Rap
Checklist: Absolutely no profanity, super serious tone.
Verse 1: NEEDS to talk about cheeseburger in some shape or form.
Verse 2: NEEDS to talk about the number 7.
Verse 3: NEEDS to talk about a floating island with a windmill.
Verse 4: NEEDS to talk about drinking a carbonated beverage but you CANNOT list any sort of brand names.
Hook: Must incorporate required concepts from all verses.


Ready? GO!
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Lietez » 18 Jan 2012, 11:45

lietez wrote:If you want to write for me, i'm gonna make it a challenge.

Style: Rap
Checklist: Absolutely no profanity, super serious tone.
Verse 1: NEEDS to talk about cheeseburger in some shape or form.
Verse 2: NEEDS to talk about the number 7.
Verse 3: NEEDS to talk about a floating island with a windmill.
Verse 4: NEEDS to talk about drinking a carbonated beverage but you CANNOT list any sort of brand names.
Hook: Must incorporate required concepts from all verses.


Ready? GO!


If you write this with good enough quality, I will actually find a beat and rap it.
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby deejaybonez (PHP) » 18 Jan 2012, 12:21

Ill give u 8 bars on each topic with a hook. No profanity, easy concepts are out of the box but I love a challenge. I'm on it
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Lietez » 18 Jan 2012, 12:29

deejaybonez (PHP) wrote:Ill give u 8 bars on each topic with a hook. No profanity, easy concepts are out of the box but I love a challenge. I'm on it


Sweet. Try to bring all the concepts together though. I don't want each verse to be random...
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby deejaybonez (PHP) » 18 Jan 2012, 13:24

Verse 1
Im just hungry in the game, fell like im starvin
so hungry im insane ina room, i aint drake call me Marvin
so pardon my french, i just want some Fromage
thats cheese in english ona burger from Thomas
Wendys baconator i see it jus like a terminator
al in red, targets sighted, bout to exterminate ya
got the fries on the side, in tha car with tha guys
ona mission fa a burger, got muchies and i aint even high

Verse 2
So hungry im stuttering, i need to be corrected
im thinkin the number 4 is actually the number 7
cant see straight, vision blurred, im infected
hunger is my sickness, i fi could id destroy this invention
for 7 hours of pain im jus yellin in vain
need to fill my stomach befor i eat a bullet, sorry Cobain
the pain is in ma gullet but it starts in ma brain
hurts like ina hole in ma head and its driven me insane

Verse 3
My imagination is goin crazy, scarin me im so hazy
visualizing things about the storys that ma mama used to tell me
seein stuff, hallucinating, i know im yung so am i aging
hunger got me trippen seeing floating islands outside of haiti
seeing things like farm houses, in winter, pigs outside jus chillen
wile the otherside has a windmill wit no breeze, simply sittin
not turnin and not changin, man hunger has me hazin
i said before, im not high, but im trippen like im blazing

Verse 4
Fianlly got my burger smashin it like a mosnter
goin Hulk im pulverizin it, smackin and im chompin
now im thirsty need somethin to take it down, wash it
not knowin what i want, why they got so many choices
so much to drink, its like they callin me wit they voices
it just be simple to get a drink wit sum fizzle
ima keep on sippin, wile i stay on ma nibblin
finally got all my meal, man hunger can really have you trippen

Hook
Hunger has got a control of me
wantin just a burger, anything witha lil grease
has me zonin out cant even get my order right
seein things so bad i cant even get my drink right.
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Lietez » 18 Jan 2012, 13:56

[quote="deejaybonez (PHP)"]Verse 1
Im just hungry in the game, fell like im starvin
so hungry im insane ina room, i aint drake call me Marvin
so pardon my french, i just want some Fromage
thats cheese in english ona burger from Thomas
Wendys baconator i see it jus like a terminator
al in red, targets sighted, bout to exterminate ya
got the fries on the side, in tha car with tha guys
ona mission fa a burger, got muchies and i aint even high

Verse 2
So hungry im stuttering, i need to be corrected
im thinkin the number 4 is actually the number 7
cant see straight, vision blurred, im infected
hunger is my sickness, i fi could id destroy this invention
for 7 hours of pain im jus yellin in vain
need to fill my stomach befor i eat a bullet, sorry Cobain
the pain is in ma gullet but it starts in ma brain
hurts like ina hole in ma head and its driven me insane

Verse 3
My imagination is goin crazy, scarin me im so hazy
visualizing things about the storys that ma mama used to tell me
seein stuff, hallucinating, i know im yung so am i aging
hunger got me trippen seeing floating islands outside of haiti
seeing things like farm houses, in winter, pigs outside jus chillen
wile the otherside has a windmill wit no breeze, simply sittin
not turnin and not changin, man hunger has me hazin
i said before, im not high, but im trippen like im blazing

Verse 4
Fianlly got my burger smashin it like a mosnter
goin Hulk im pulverizin it, smackin and im chompin
now im thirsty need somethin to take it down, wash it
not knowin what i want, why they got so many choices
so much to drink, its like they callin me wit they voices
it just be simple to get a drink wit sum fizzle
ima keep on sippin, wile i stay on ma nibblin
finally got all my meal, man hunger can really have you trippen

Hook
Hunger has got a control of me
wantin just a burger, anything witha lil grease
has me zonin out cant even get my order right
seein things so bad i cant even get my drink right.[/quote]

Not bad, not bad. I prolly would have taken it a different direction but i'll give it a shot. Might edit it a little to make it fit to my style.
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby deejaybonez (PHP) » 18 Jan 2012, 14:03

sorry, i didnt know what direction you were aiming at, but this is justa quick idea. u gave sum random concepts so i put together wat i cud in the time i have. gotta get to work but hope u can use some of it and make it work :D

Thanks for the opportunity
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Electrock » 18 Jan 2012, 16:02

BTW, hilarious!
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Re: ghostwriter for the loops

Postby Lietez » 18 Jan 2012, 17:34

Electrock wrote:BTW, hilarious!


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